More Ross Macdonald: The Moving Target & Harper

Book: The Moving Target by Ross Macdonald

published 1949 

Film: Harper  starring Paul Newman

released 1966

 

 


 

I’ve been reading and re-reading a lot of Ross Macdonald, as I recently took part in a podcast with an old friend: Sergio Angelini of Tipping my Fedora – originally a blog, now a podcast empire.


 

We are both big fans of Macdonald, so really enjoyed the chance to chat....

Tipping my Fedora – Ross Macdonald

 

There are already a handful of his books on the blog, and I am taking the chance to fill some of the gaps. This post does go over the same ground as parts of the podcast, but has added value!

The Moving Target was Macdonald's first novel to feature Lew Archer, the private eye who became his main character. For me it is too complicated and brutal, and really is an early work – though that doesn’t make it a bad book.  Macdonald, and Archer, turned into something gentler as the years and the books rolled by, even though the plots, which are usually about secrets, get darker and darker. What I mean is, you wouldn’t trust the Archer of this book with your daughter: later you totally would.

There are too many characters, it is hard to keep them all straight, and they are not necessary. Archer loses consciousness 3 times at key points – you feel Macdonald is saying 'oh we'd better have a fight now, time Archer is knocked out.'

It's a good complex plot, with features that will recur again and again – rich man with dysfunctional family, including a second wife. This time it’s the patriarch who has gone missing, and Archer goes looking – via Hollywood, bars, a woman who is keen on astrology, a mystic on a mountain, and some unexpected plot points. Value for money in terms of content, even if it is a bit confused at times.

And hints of the more philosophical, serious moments to come in later books -  here we get a description of a character:

"You don't know the type like I do," Graves said. "I've seen this same thing happen to other boys, not to such an extreme degree, of course, but the same thing. They went out of high school Into the Army or the Air Corps and made good In a big way. They were officers and gentlemen with high pay, an even higher opinion of themselves, and all the success they needed to keep it blown up. War was their element, and when the war was finished, they were finished. They had to go back to boys' jobs and take orders from middle-aged civilians. Handling pens and adding machines instead of flight sticks and machine guns. Some of them couldn't take it and went bad. They thought the world was their oyster and couldn't understand why It had been snatched away from them. They wanted to snatch It back. They wanted to be free and happy and successful without laying a|ly foundation for freedom or happiness or success. And there's the hangover."


 

Not much in the way of clothes – Miranda, the missing man’s daughter enters ‘wearing a black-striped dress, narrow in the right places, full in the others.’ Later she dresses casually to accompany Harper on a road trip to the mystic mountain….



Many years later, 1966, this was turned into a film, starring Paul Newman – and a cast including Lauren Bacall & Janet Leigh (both sadly underused), Julie Harris and Robert Wagner, Shelley Winters chewing the scenery. It was very much set in the 1960s, and  the whole film works well and was very successful. Is Newman too good-looking to be Archer? There is a story about why he is called Harper, not Archer, to do with rights to the books and character.

The film was written by William Goldman who (as ever) has interesting things to say about it: there is an audio commentary which I found fascinating.  For example, Newman/Harper chews gum in every single scene which is horrible – according to Goldman, it was Newman who thought it was right for the character, and it caused tremendous continuity problems.

He says that a vital scene in the film is played under the opening credits – Lew Harper wakes up in his office, getting ready to go to work, goes to make coffee but finds there is none, pulls yesterday's dead filter out of the bin. Goldman reckons this amused and entertained the audience, got them on Harper’s side, and made them like him.

Goldman is the ultimate anecdotalist – you know you’re being manoeuvred and manipulated, and he may well be making half of it up, or at least smoothing the corners of his stories. He repeats versions of the same story. But he is also full of charisma and just hugely entertaining. In this post – could not be further from Hollywood, Goldman etc - I tell the story of how I came to read one of his memoir books,

Goldman does a good job of turning the book into a script – smoothing the transitions, not bothering too much with how people get into or out of scenes unless it is important. Goldman has written about this before now - he has a very funny schtick on the end of the Hitchcock film North By Northwest – and Macdonald got better at it as the years rolled on.

There is one awful scene in the movie where Harper goads another character by being vile about his girlfriend: I did not understand the point of that, and found it objectionable.

In this post – about a book set in a NY hotel in the 1940s – I outlined how I became fascinated by the idea of the lift starter, and investigated it. Here in this book we have a taxi starter at the airport, in a similar line.

There is more Ross Macdonald to come.

Comments

  1. I started to read The Moving Target but couldn't get interested enough to keep going. Glad to know Archer mellowed in later books! I don't enjoy the hard-boiled style and had hoped MacDonald would have a kinder, gentler approach!

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    1. There's a definite change for the better as they go on Marty - still dark and noir, but a different attitude.

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  2. You forgot to mention Pamela Tiffin as Miranda, a major selling point to me and I preferred her entrance dancing on the swimmingpool's spring board in a blue and white bikini superior to her book entrance. A purely male view of course ;-)

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    1. So much of it's time! Could it BE more 1966? I'm glad you enjoyed...

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  3. I always liked Lew Archer as a character, Moira, although I agree that he gets more philosophical and, well, likeable as the series goes on. Interesting you mention those events in the story that feel a bit contrived. I wonder if there was some sort of 'action/thriller novel template' that suggested there should be a fight here or a man with a gun there. In any case, I'm glad you're a fan of Macdonald; he really did do some fine work.

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    1. Yes indeed Margot, and yes I too wonder if he was still finding his way, thinking his stories had to pan out a dfiferent way. Definitely one of the greats.

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  4. But, wait ... the scene in which Harper torments that character is crucial to the reveal of one of the villains - and gives Wagner his best moment in the film. And Lew clearly doesn't mean what he says - it being so seemingly cruel and out of character is what makes it memorable... right? On the other hand, fascinating how they use Bacall, who in Big Sleep mode in 20 years has gone from the leading lady to the equivalent of General Sternwood :)

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    1. But she is hardly a benevolent equivalent, is she? And she has certainly no illusions at all about her husband and daughter, something conceivably you can't say about the general and his two daughters.

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    2. Sergio - we're not challenging any stereotypes are we? You're all 'the end justifies the means' and I'm 'Oh but he's beeing MEAN' 😀😀😀
      However, giving Wagner a great moment justifies anything (???)
      Jotell: I always thought General Sternwood was a character who should have had more detail applied to him. His first scene is excellent but no development...

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    3. General Sternwood in the book, fairly closely mirrored in the 1946 film, seems to only really be concerned about what happened to Rusty Reagan. He seems resigned to whatever his daughters get caught up in. In the book these elements are beautifully fused together. The 1946 film changes that completely while the 1978 film, despite being quite poor (and with truly diabolical fashions) handles that aspect of the story's resolution surprisingly well.

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    4. Lovely analysis Sergio. I may have to watch/read again.
      Bad luck on anyone making a 1978 film with contemporary fashions. It was a bad time...

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  5. I love the idea that Paul Newman reusing the coffee filter was a vital scene. It reminded me of a similar character-establishing scene at the beginning of The Long Goodbye with Elliot Gould as Marlowe. He has bought food for his cat and is decanting it into another container to make the cat think it's getting its favourite food. Chrissie

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    1. Oh yes, as soon as you said that it summoned up the full image!
      Also - The King of Marvin Gardens, where Jack Nicholson plays a late-night DJ, has a long opening sequence where he is speaking to his listeners.... with a great followup
      I thought of that particularly because in the recent new TV series from Mackenzie Crook, Small Prophets, the hero lives in Marvin Gardens, which must be deliberate. (There were also Monopoly items visible for a few seconds under the road sign)

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  6. Oh that's interesting. So many little details to notice in Small Prophets, which I enjoyed hugely. I'll have to watch it again.
    Another great film opening - Michael Caine making coffee in The Ipcress File.

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    1. I loved it! I was nervous that it wouldn't be as good as Detectorists, but it totally won me over.
      William Goldman had interesting comments on his opening - that the studio wanted an extra scene, but there was no way to start the actual story earlier, so he had to think of something else. So he chose character exposition via early morning activities.
      Was Ipcress the same?
      Trying to think of some opening sequences featuring women...

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    2. Not a fave, but there's the opening of The Philadelphia Story with Kate and Cary.

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    3. Scarlett and the Tarletons at the start of GWTW? Also a good crinoline-flouncing scene!

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    4. All excellent suggestions Marty!

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    5. Also the opening sequence of Pygmalion/My Fair Lady.

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    6. Rebecca (Hitchcock), Death on the Nile (Ustinov).

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    7. I was just thinking about Pretty Woman - the opening scene is him at a party, but then over the opening titles she is getting up and dressed for another happy night out on Hollywood Boulevard.

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  7. Just watched the opening of The Ipcress File and it's so good. The opening scene is the abduction of the scientist but under the opening titles you see Michael Caine waking up, groping for his glasses and making his coffee, grinding the beans and so forth with the plangent theme music by John Barry and great sixties typography - it's the epitome of sixties cool. I am watching in homage to Len Deighton. Chrissie

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    1. Wonderful Len Deighton, RIP.
      Oh yes, thanks for reminding me. One of the things I like in the movies is that Harry Palmer is meant to be a gourmet cook (which is not true of the nameless character in the books) but then he is shown buying tinned mushrooms, and I'm not sure the food looks appealing.
      But yes, an iconic opening!

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  8. The mushrooms are 'champignons' which are clearly supposed to be more sophisticated than just any old mushrooms! Watched it all last night and really enjoyed it.

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    1. Yes but still.... and isn't he also showing off to someone else? 'oh no, my tin is better than yours'? it doesn't wear well. Great film though

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