Book: The Moving Target by Ross Macdonald
published 1949
Film: Harper starring Paul Newman
released 1966
I’ve been reading and re-reading a lot of Ross Macdonald,
as I recently took part in a podcast with an old friend: Sergio Angelini of
Tipping my Fedora – originally a blog, now a podcast empire.
We are both big fans of Macdonald, so really enjoyed the
chance to chat....
Tipping my Fedora – Ross Macdonald
There are already a handful of his books on the blog, and I
am taking the chance to fill some of the gaps. This post does go over the same ground as parts of the podcast, but has added value!
The Moving Target was
Macdonald's first novel to feature Lew Archer, the private eye who became his main
character. For me it is too complicated and brutal, and really is an
early work – though that doesn’t make it a bad book. Macdonald, and Archer, turned into something
gentler as the years and the books rolled by, even though the plots, which are
usually about secrets, get darker and darker. What I mean is, you wouldn’t
trust the Archer of this book with your daughter: later you totally would.
There are too many characters, it is hard to keep them all
straight, and they are not necessary. Archer loses consciousness 3 times at key
points – you feel Macdonald is saying 'oh we'd better have a fight now, time Archer
is knocked out.'
It's a good complex plot, with features that will recur
again and again – rich man with dysfunctional family, including a second wife.
This time it’s the patriarch who has gone missing, and Archer goes looking –
via Hollywood, bars, a woman who is keen on astrology, a mystic on a mountain,
and some unexpected plot points. Value for money in terms of content, even if
it is a bit confused at times.
And hints of the more philosophical, serious moments to come in later books - here we get a description of a character:
"You don't know the type like I do," Graves said. "I've seen this same thing happen to other boys, not to such an extreme degree, of course, but the same thing. They went out of high school Into the Army or the Air Corps and made good In a big way. They were officers and gentlemen with high pay, an even higher opinion of themselves, and all the success they needed to keep it blown up. War was their element, and when the war was finished, they were finished. They had to go back to boys' jobs and take orders from middle-aged civilians. Handling pens and adding machines instead of flight sticks and machine guns. Some of them couldn't take it and went bad. They thought the world was their oyster and couldn't understand why It had been snatched away from them. They wanted to snatch It back. They wanted to be free and happy and successful without laying a|ly foundation for freedom or happiness or success. And there's the hangover."
Not much in the way of clothes – Miranda, the missing man’s daughter enters ‘wearing a black-striped dress, narrow in the right places, full in the others.’ Later she dresses casually to accompany Harper on a road trip to the mystic mountain….
Many years later, 1966, this was turned into a film,
starring Paul Newman – and a cast including Lauren Bacall & Janet Leigh
(both sadly underused), Julie Harris and Robert Wagner, Shelley Winters chewing
the scenery. It was very much set in the 1960s, and the whole film works well and was very
successful. Is Newman too good-looking to be Archer? There is a story about why
he is called Harper, not Archer, to do with rights to the books and character.
The film was written by William Goldman who (as ever) has
interesting things to say about it: there is an audio commentary which I found
fascinating. For example, Newman/Harper
chews gum in every single scene which is horrible – according to Goldman, it
was Newman who thought it was right for the character, and it caused tremendous
continuity problems.
He says that a vital scene in the film is played under the
opening credits – Lew Harper wakes up in his office, getting ready to go to
work, goes to make coffee but finds there is none, pulls yesterday's dead filter
out of the bin. Goldman reckons this amused and entertained the audience, got
them on Harper’s side, and made them like him.
Goldman is the ultimate anecdotalist – you know you’re being
manoeuvred and manipulated, and he may well be making half of it up, or at
least smoothing the corners of his stories. He repeats versions of the same
story. But he is also full of charisma and just hugely entertaining. In this
post – could not be further from Hollywood, Goldman etc - I tell the story of
how I came to read one of his memoir
books,
Goldman does a good job of turning the book into a script –
smoothing the transitions, not bothering too much with how people get into or
out of scenes unless it is important. Goldman has written about this before now
- he has a very funny schtick on the end of the Hitchcock film North
By Northwest – and Macdonald got better at it as the years
rolled on.
There is one awful scene in the movie where Harper goads another character by being vile about his girlfriend: I did not understand the point of that, and found it objectionable.
In this post – about a book set in a NY hotel in the 1940s – I outlined how I became fascinated by the idea of the lift starter, and investigated it. Here in this book we have a taxi starter at the airport, in a similar line.
There is more Ross Macdonald to come.




I started to read The Moving Target but couldn't get interested enough to keep going. Glad to know Archer mellowed in later books! I don't enjoy the hard-boiled style and had hoped MacDonald would have a kinder, gentler approach!
ReplyDeleteYou forgot to mention Pamela Tiffin as Miranda, a major selling point to me and I preferred her entrance dancing on the swimmingpool's spring board in a blue and white bikini superior to her book entrance. A purely male view of course ;-)
ReplyDeleteI always liked Lew Archer as a character, Moira, although I agree that he gets more philosophical and, well, likeable as the series goes on. Interesting you mention those events in the story that feel a bit contrived. I wonder if there was some sort of 'action/thriller novel template' that suggested there should be a fight here or a man with a gun there. In any case, I'm glad you're a fan of Macdonald; he really did do some fine work.
ReplyDeleteBut, wait ... the scene in which Harper torments that character is crucial to the reveal of one of the villains - and gives Wagner his best moment in the film. And Lew clearly doesn't mean what he says - it being so seemingly cruel and out of character is what makes it memorable... right? On the other hand, fascinating how they use Bacall, who in Big Sleep mode in 20 years has gone from the leading lady to the equivalent of General Sternwood :)
ReplyDeleteBut she is hardly a benevolent equivalent, is she? And she has certainly no illusions at all about her husband and daughter, something conceivably you can't say about the general and his two daughters.
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